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Contest entry for :iconkioco:'s "Cin-Harurun Themed Contest" ([link]). This was inspired by the amazing artist :iconcin-harurun:

Yayyyyy I spent the whole day today doing this...x3 I can't help but be proud of this because for once I can say that this is MY STYLE! Well, the lineart is atleast..Also, I worked really hard on the hands and arms. I had to awkwardly pose my arm in a mirror and draw. xD I hope you all like it QwQ

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Comments and constructive criticism are appreciated! Thank you.
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Materials: Adobe Photoshop 7.0, Paint tool SAI, Bamboo Pen Tablet
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Hi! sorry for the late critique asldkjfsdf;;

ok so first: I just really really like the way you colored the clothes! especially how there are purple and pink tones in
the blue dress-that's definitely a nice touch! Also, the hands look absolutely fabulous!!

Just a few slight corrections:
1. the girl on the left looks like she's in a bit of an uncomfortable position. Her face is facing the blue-dress girl, but her body seems to be turned a little bit so that part of the back is facing the viewer. Generally, the upper torso follows the direction the head is facing-making the upper torso face a different direction would require more effort. You might want to fix her upper torso so that her torso is facing the same direction her face is- that might make her pose look a little bit more natural. But other than that, she's looking pretty good! you obviously have an understanding of how cloth wrinkles/ruffles etc. look like, so good job!!
2. The girl on the right is looking pretty good too! the only thing i can nitpick on is probably her facial structure- if you look at a real face, at that angle you would still be able to see part of the cheek and a bit of the eye on the other side of the face. (sorry im not really good at explaining;;;) however, manga face styles are generally pretty flat, so if you don't want to make slight edits that's fine too.

Overall, good job!! the picture looks pretty nice hehe :)

Sorry if I was unclear about anything OTL
if you have any questions, feel free to ask!!